English, small fixes v_0
authorFrantišek Kučera <franta-hg@frantovo.cz>
Thu, 07 Nov 2019 12:36:15 +0100
branchv_0
changeset 61 4eacba604e8c
parent 60 e61810f49924
child 62 f7e5d47d15ad
English, small fixes
text/ssm.en.xml
--- a/text/ssm.en.xml	Sat Oct 12 17:10:43 2019 +0200
+++ b/text/ssm.en.xml	Thu Nov 07 12:36:15 2019 +0100
@@ -248,7 +248,7 @@
 		<item>
 			<id>d341b78e-15b9-4077-8b48-9e54c93391ac</id>
 			<type>recommendation</type>
-			<text>And they should be written in machine readable format (e.g. WSDL, WADL, ASN.1, XSD, Diameter dictionary, D-Bus) or at least formal language (Backus–Naur Form, EBNF etc.)</text>
+			<text>And they should be written in machine readable format (e.g. WSDL, ASN.1, XML Schema, Diameter dictionary, D-Bus) or at least formal language (Backus–Naur Form, EBNF etc.)</text>
 		</item>
 		<item>
 			<id>d61b3e31-bb9f-4333-87c8-9fb32f33a49d</id>
@@ -645,7 +645,7 @@
 			<item>
 				<id>c9f4d9f4-f959-48ad-bc68-6720dd4596e3</id>
 				<type>requirement</type>
-				<text>If there is no default, the encoding must be specified in the metadata attached (e.g. protocol headers, extended attributes on filesystem) to the actual data or at least at the beginning of the data (like declaration in XML format).</text>
+				<text>If there is no default, the encoding must be specified in the metadata attached (e.g. protocol headers, extended attributes on filesystem) to the actual data or at least at the beginning of the data (like declaration in the XML format).</text>
 			</item>
 		</item>
 		<item>
@@ -682,7 +682,7 @@
 		<item>
 			<id>e746eb5b-8d8b-4ec8-9315-a311f35e156a</id>
 			<type>requirement</type>
-			<text>Users must not be pushed to register at a proprietary social networks (at particular providers of such services).</text>
+			<text>Users must not be pushed to register at proprietary social networks (at particular providers of such services).</text>
 			<text>Users without such account must not be disadvantaged – use open and decentralized networks/protocols instead.</text>
 			<link>
 				<url>https://www.gnu.org/prep/maintain/maintain.html#Ethical-and-Philosophical-Consideration</url>