diff -r 5096007944cf -r c9bbf33fd1ae make/data/tzdata/factory
--- a/make/data/tzdata/factory	Thu Nov 01 09:41:04 2018 -0700
+++ b/make/data/tzdata/factory	Thu Nov 01 12:43:21 2018 -0400
@@ -21,11 +21,13 @@
 # or visit www.oracle.com if you need additional information or have any
 # questions.
 #
+# tzdb data for noncommittal factory settings
+
 # This file is in the public domain, so clarified as of
 # 2009-05-17 by Arthur David Olson.
 
-# For distributors who don't want to put time zone specification in
-# their installation procedures.  Users that run 'date' will get the
+# For distributors who don't want to specify a timezone in their
+# installation procedures.  Users who run 'date' will get the
 # time zone abbreviation "-00", indicating that the actual time zone
 # is unknown.