--- a/text/ssm.en.xml	Sat Jul 02 23:19:41 2022 +0200
+++ b/text/ssm.en.xml	Mon Aug 22 17:03:11 2022 +0200
@@ -273,7 +273,7 @@
 			<item>
 				<id>aa0554cf-0cac-47c2-8075-54a84cb20e74</id>
 				<type>recommendation</type>
-				<text>Use randomly generated identifiers when full decentralization is desired. These identifiers might be just random (e.g. UUID version 4) or derived from a public key (e.g. an SSH key or a Tor address) or a hash of a (secret) data.</text>
+				<text>Use randomly generated identifiers when full decentralization is desired. These identifiers might be just random (e.g. UUID version 4) or derived from a public key (e.g. an SSH key or a Tor address) or a hash of some (secret) data.</text>
 				<note>When public key or a hash of secret data is used, then ownership of the name or namespace can be reliably proved.</note>
 				<note>Random identifiers must be picked from a sufficiently large space where we can assume that collisions are effectively eliminated.</note>
 			</item>